the new edition of A Farewell to
Arms being played as a publicity
coup, a conspiracy of the auth-
or's heirs and his Princeton-bred
publisher (now subsumed in S & S),
to keep his name in lights. But,
with the new edition offering
some 47 of the known variants
which the writer considered
for ending the novel, it's on-
ly innocently true, that once
again scholarship resembles a
parlour game for dinner parties
I don't think I'll play; I ad-
mire that he wrestled the thing
to ground at all, never mind how
well. Not every excision from a
draft manuscript is probitive,
except of being unchosen. An un-
used phrase is not rejected, it
is unused. But the cardinal fact,
underlying everything else tend-
ing toward caution in the use of
such manuscripts, is what a flim-
sy compass the stoutest of them
is, for what had flickered through
and behind the creative screen.
Our best guide to precisely that
making, is what he had chosen to
say before: each choice, in him,
reinforcing terms of notorious
"simplicity." Pretty cool? There
is our game, far above the deftly
fallen waistband and the archly
rugged buckle of our stance, in-
side the eye that's blinded by
the retina that pulls away from
focus in the strain of being con-
sistent. To haul our story to the
ground calls now upon that memory
which is the raw act, revisited
through the flow of blood. Then
do they read.
iii Jeremy Young
draft manuscript is probitive,
except of being unchosen. An un-
used phrase is not rejected, it
is unused. But the cardinal fact,
underlying everything else tend-
ing toward caution in the use of
such manuscripts, is what a flim-
sy compass the stoutest of them
is, for what had flickered through
and behind the creative screen.
Our best guide to precisely that
making, is what he had chosen to
say before: each choice, in him,
reinforcing terms of notorious
"simplicity." Pretty cool? There
is our game, far above the deftly
fallen waistband and the archly
rugged buckle of our stance, in-
side the eye that's blinded by
the retina that pulls away from
focus in the strain of being con-
sistent. To haul our story to the
ground calls now upon that memory
which is the raw act, revisited
through the flow of blood. Then
do they read.
iii Jeremy Young
oh but for the love of money
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